| 2004-08-11 21:43:23 |
12 is too young
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Can I fuck you if I can e-mail me! |
| 2004-08-18 06:47:28 |
12 is too young
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a good story atleast needs to run smoothly and has to be thought out. this is like a first draft! |
| 2004-08-18 18:30:12 |
12 is too young
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this story sucked donkey dick |
| 2004-08-21 13:11:14 |
12 is too young
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that sucked |
| 2004-08-23 10:22:58 |
12 is too young
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Somebody says he even makes it sound like a 12-yr-old with all the mistakes. I've never met a 12-yr-old who would write as badly as that, so the writer of this story must be either utterly ignorant or...wait for it...FIENDISHLY clever! |