| 2004-07-31 21:42:50 |
12 is too young
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were you drunk when you wrote this? |
| 2004-07-31 23:16:50 |
12 is too young
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kid, you need to finish second grade then re-write that strory......... |
| 2004-08-03 21:07:39 |
12 is too young
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wow that grammar is trash |
| 2004-08-05 03:26:33 |
12 is too young
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The story would have been so much better if you had proofread it and taken some time to work on the storyline. It seemed totally inplausible however. They met twice and her, being a virgin let him fuck her without a condom, fuck her in the ass, and messed with foot fetish stuff. Not gonna happen, |
| 2004-08-09 19:00:13 |
12 is too young
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it was gay, wasnt wrote bye a 12 y.o., it was wrote by a 40 y.o. man who lives with his mom the spelling errors are cuased by his 1st grade education, |