| 2005-07-11 06:02:33 |
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Hey, I liked your story and thought it very authentic. I guess most of these idiots that wrote the stupid comments here, did not take time to notice that you are female writing a story as a male. You did fine and I, for one, would love to read more of your efforts. |
| 2005-07-11 15:40:59 |
childs play_(0)
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well i liked it. all you people keep saying that it sucked because of her spelling and run on sentences. just read the story and enjoy it. if your in here to do spelling checks and such your in the wrong place these are sex storys. just enjoy then. oh ya keep writing don't listen to these jerks. |
| 2005-08-01 09:57:25 |
childs play_(0)
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guys he was teaching the 9th grade.....get it shes was 14 duhh its not that hard of a concept but yea good story i would say 6/10. |
| 2005-08-10 04:27:12 |
childs play_(0)
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What are titz, titz, titz bad speeelar |
| 2005-08-17 12:02:57 |
childs play_(0)
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Finaly, another person who understands that this is a fuck story, not a book. People, just read the story, get off, and get on with your life. Don't sit there and count the spelling errors and shit. Anna, I think you did fairly well. Keep up the stories! |