| 2005-12-24 18:27:38 |
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liked the story loads 9/10. |
| 2006-02-03 06:04:13 |
childs play_(0)
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bal chhal boka choda |
| 2006-02-26 17:44:06 |
childs play_(0)
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its an alright story but dude ever heard of using puctuation? like qoate marks and shit if you put some in you'll be ok just watch your grammer. |
| 2006-03-11 11:09:24 |
childs play_(0)
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Good story like it...=D |
| 2006-04-12 21:43:31 |
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Person 2 below me ... if you're going to point out not using punctuation and to work on his dynamics ... at least learn how to spell grammar ... its with 2 a's ... but very nice story write more :D |