| 2005-09-28 22:57:18 |
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You Guys do know that this isn't school, just read it, don't mind the mistakes, get off and go to another site |
| 2005-10-25 21:48:57 |
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it was ok |
| 2005-11-11 17:04:42 |
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Nice story. A few things didn't make sense, and your spelling could be better, but overall you did well. I enjoyed it. |
| 2005-11-15 13:54:34 |
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Give way Hemingway. This guy has the goods. With a little work this could make a magical screenplay; the likes of which haven't been seen since Pee Wee's Great Adventure or even Ishtar. |
| 2005-12-09 15:18:00 |
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write more...i think she needs a detention every day...let this one bloom into a good series |