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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-01 10:31:49 | 72 Hours of Lust - Part 3 | Fuka your an ass hole maby you should get a life you fucker!! and i hope you die!!!! the story was great keep up the great work!!! |
| 2005-09-05 13:49:31 | 72 Hours of Lust - Part 3 | Not bad...got me wet |
| 2007-07-10 18:03:38 | 72 Hours of Lust - Part 3 | u no wht "fucka" ur just mad cause everyone else rites great sex stories and u cant rite them for SHIT so dont get mad at him cause everyone loves them u little fuck off |
| 2005-06-02 04:18:26 | Stopover | thats fucking disgusting |
| 2005-06-02 10:36:55 | Stopover | Your storyline isnt too bad, but pay more attention to how you write it. You are talking in the third person at times and then back to directly citing the events. Also take some time to read your finished work before submission and then you can fix up the spelling and missed words. |