| 2004-07-16 07:15:12 |
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suc,ked... learn how to write, please. I couldn't even read the first paragraph, stupid... |
| 2004-07-16 13:08:23 |
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where was the females it said was in the story .i thought ther was going to be some voyuerism when it put females and anal together or at least a female using a strap-on up a slut's ass |
| 2004-07-16 23:49:28 |
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The spelling and grammar of the first paragraph tell me 'Hold onto your pants. Another trailer park moron is taking up writing'. The second paragraph confirms my worste fears. I feel a mild headache coming on as I force myself through the third paragraph. Should I continue ? This story is so shit it doesn't even deserve to be read. |
| 2004-07-18 05:42:39 |
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Only a RUBE would spell rub-rubed. The story is too short to be of value, your spelling is terrible, you use grammer like you think it is your mother's mother--generally, take up underwater swimming and leave the rest of us alone until you learn how to use the Queen's language |
| 2004-11-03 04:09:18 |
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Did you flunk English or just not know how to spell? Buy a dictionary so we can read it next time. |