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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-08-20 15:26:52 | My Party_(0) | Eh, I believe that you must have failed English when you were in school. Those applied classes must not have done anything for you at all. That's quite sad. |
| 2004-08-27 13:11:36 | My Party_(0) | your writing is great; original and arousing. but the lousy grammer and spelling are distracting for the reader. if you care about your fans, and wish to be taken seriously as a writer - perfect your craft. meant in a kind way - your content is outstanding, your execution needs work. |
| 2004-09-08 14:01:57 | My Party_(0) | Good story,fuck the English critics |
| 2004-09-09 22:55:25 | My Party_(0) | Yea I stroked to this story. It was great and I did have your picture in my head as I did it. |
| 2004-09-22 20:53:22 | My Party_(0) | didn't mean to come off so harsh about the spelling, etc. this is damn beautiful writing; incredibly original and almost unbearably real. turned my cock to stone. simply had to cum, no alternative. but its kinda like watching your favorite movie on an old, soiled bed sheet, eating a porterhouse steak out of a tin pan, drinking fine whiskey from a shoe. the world is full of writers that have mastered all the bullshit nuts and bolts, but have nothing to say. it just seems too bad to read a writer that has incredible things to say, writes with passion and conviction, truth and blunt honesty, but presents it this way. c'mon shadow - you've got a gift. rachet it up and don't give up. |