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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-07-17 23:39:27 | The Set Up_(0) | Where is the elaboration? I agree with those people... it was short and the plot barely exists at all. Try to be a little more vivid when you write. A story is supposed to create a picture, until you barely realize you're reading anymore and you feel like you're there, watching what's going on. This story did nothing for me. 3/10 only because you wrote a story and were able to separate your thoughts into paragraphs. Kudos for that I suppose. |
| 2004-07-16 03:14:04 | My Aunt Teaches 8 - The Johnstones | The GURU.. You are the next Nancy Friday :) Start writing a book.. You have an avtive imagination... |
| 2004-07-16 12:54:43 | My Aunt Teaches 8 - The Johnstones | only problem with this series is that i can't emphasize enough about how important it is that you decribe his cock as the biggest mother-fucking thing these women have ever seen it is so fucking big these women tremble when they see it.Say it's about 20 inches long like a 16 ounce bottle of pop |
| 2004-07-16 23:39:07 | My Aunt Teaches 8 - The Johnstones | that was great! plz make some more wit the same guy!!!! i reallly really liked it.! |
| 2005-01-25 22:35:36 | My Aunt Teaches 8 - The Johnstones | i have always agreed with titman al becuase he knows his storys well |