| 2004-07-17 22:05:50 |
Bryan's Corvette
|
This made me so hot I'm going to go KS a Dr00d! |
| 2004-07-19 01:28:42 |
Bryan's Corvette
|
Looking forward to seeing more. Great job on the details!! |
| 2004-07-19 23:25:23 |
Bryan's Corvette
|
Great build up! This was good, too. You ability to carry the reader along is amazing. |
| 2004-07-24 22:23:36 |
Bryan's Corvette
|
Very good piece of writing. The pacing and perfectly balanced buildup was superb. Seldom has a writer drained so much excitement from so little actual sexual activity. Sensiblysexy knows how to write well and I really enjoyed it. Please don't stop writing. |
| 2005-08-06 17:52:37 |
Autumns Hard Lesson
|
Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |