| 2004-07-16 07:01:40 |
The best Independance day ever
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this story sucked as well as the grammar. stop writing, please..... |
| 2004-07-16 07:45:45 |
The best Independance day ever
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the sex sucked, the writing sucked, you need to proofread before posting |
| 2004-07-16 23:05:23 |
The best Independance day ever
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so much haters.. People get a life lets see you haters write a story. |
| 2004-07-17 16:22:40 |
The best Independance day ever
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i thought the story was alright everybody get's better with practice.After he shot cum on her face she should have went downstairs where his sister told her that she had some white stuff on her lips and wiped it off for her.Then tasted it and said.That tastes like cum.Bitch you've been fucking my brother and if you don't help me seduce him i'm telling your mom |
| 2004-07-18 01:51:11 |
The best Independance day ever
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this shit sucked donkey balls |