| 2004-12-05 09:00:52 |
Baby-sitter and Teenager
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well i think the author has a ver interesting writing style. remeniscent of a type of writing t they used in the late sixties. no frills, just staight top the point, like a script. crap story though. |
| 2004-12-05 12:15:15 |
Baby-sitter and Teenager
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sounds like an indian telling the story....sucked |
| 2004-12-05 13:53:24 |
Baby-sitter and Teenager
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Sometimes you need a sentence that is longer than 4 words to make a story interesting...not to mention the setup, format, storyline, ah hell the whole thing sucked. Take high school english so you can at least write something that we can understand. 2/10 |
| 2004-12-05 14:22:54 |
Baby-sitter and Teenager
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fuck the ass hole who wrote the sucking story |
| 2004-12-05 21:16:15 |
Baby-sitter and Teenager
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it was ok, fix the boringness of it. fix the spellling and gammer. then it will be better |