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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-02-06 15:35:48 | Baby-sitter and Teenager | That story was fucking awsome, make another babysitter story. |
| 2005-02-22 21:24:24 | Baby-sitter and Teenager | yeah it started off really good then got boring to many "and thens" |
| 2005-04-02 20:42:07 | Baby-sitter and Teenager | i wish i had had a babysitter like that. but i agree with hotstuffhaha |
| 2005-06-21 11:42:37 | Baby-sitter and Teenager | I liked the idea of the story, but a little bit of advice...it IS ok to NOT use their names in every line of the story. I mean there were also a few lines that repeated themselves and a few lines that didnt really make sense at all. Just try to improve on detail, and dont drag things out so much. This sounded like a paper that I would have probably written in the 5th grade. Just try to improve on what you are trying to say and liven it up a bit. But as I said, great idea for a story. |
| 2005-08-02 16:42:18 | Baby-sitter and Teenager | this is sutch a stupid story, anyone with a 6 pack and has condoms is a little too old for a baby sitter and for everything else...go to school and learn about an intresting thing called 'Grammer' |