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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2004-09-11 13:23:16 | Getting Buck Wild in Public | thats,ummmmmm, not me |
| 2005-03-21 14:06:36 | Getting Buck Wild in Public | Yea the youth minisiter licked my pussy in the second pew one day |
| 2005-09-01 14:34:28 | Getting Buck Wild in Public | what did the rest of the church members think? |
| 2004-09-11 00:10:36 | Vietnam | Wow. Thats a fucking good story, man. Hurry up with the next part, i cant wait to read it. |
| 2004-09-11 00:33:03 | Vietnam | Hate to rain on your first effort but you have a lot of very anachronistic things going on in this tale. - Female combat officers, NCOs or Grunts in Vietnam, Not then. - Officers dont go around murdering their subbordinates in any serious army. -US sent the convicted to prison not fireing squads. The VC would but not the USA. You may want to reset this for a future war when you might have this situation but if you want to do a story about the past get the details right. It really spoils the thing when the author doesnt do thier homework. |