| 2005-02-05 16:01:22 |
Vietnam
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That was a really good story, love the part about the whole vietnam thing, but it was really off. Still good though. Thorn is right, hurry hurry hurry with the next part! really great stuff, esp. the nurses! Fox wasn't bad herself, either. BTW, sergeants are NCO's, not officers, and can only lead squads, not platoons, although I suppose a Lt. could name a sergeant second-in-command. Hurry with part two! |
| 2005-02-19 00:13:36 |
Vietnam
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that story had too mny miss types but other than that it was good but if he likes fox why is he fucking the nurse lol |
| 2005-02-20 00:06:09 |
Vietnam
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There are a lot of historically innacuracies in this story...(most of which Asia mentioned). However, i think that this story was very good otherwise, both storyline and descriptions being very gripping. If you were to work out those historical innacuracies, this might be one of the best stories on the site (and i applaud your effort with a 10/10) |
| 2005-03-05 18:12:11 |
Vietnam
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this reminds me of the movie with jeff foxworthy, wen he nam? |
| 2005-03-06 16:28:35 |
Vietnam
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good story i give 10/10 peace all |