| 2005-05-04 16:42:24 |
Another womans man
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this story was horrible. You need more lust and sexuality. Try harder! |
| 2005-05-12 19:27:07 |
Another womans man
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not the best story :( |
| 2005-11-16 04:12:28 |
Another womans man
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Robotic. Needs very descriptive passages. We want to be able to taste the wetwork while we are reading a story. You have the basics, you just need to get nasty! |
| 2005-12-31 18:06:24 |
Another womans man
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I thought it was pretty realistic. I had a simular affair and romance didn't show up untill later. |
| 2006-09-27 20:25:23 |
Another womans man
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best story ever |