| 2004-10-21 09:45:07 |
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very well done. hope you send me the 2nd one lol. |
| 2004-10-25 11:53:34 |
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hey keith hurry part three and how about Cheryl telling her sister about what she saw Kevin doing to his body and they both hide in his closet and wait to try to catch him masturbating and with his bad back Cheryl's sister gives him a sensual massage trying to tease him and Cheryl into a threeway '''Cheryl get's horny watching her sister teasing Kevin''' bringing his monsterous cock to the brink of cumming and then stopping'''''frustrating him and Cheryl and again great work''''''remember voyuerism |
| 2004-10-27 03:12:05 |
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This was great. Can't wait for the rest of the story. |
| 2004-11-02 13:24:03 |
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Superb! I loved it. Great graphic and detailed descriptions. I'm looking for chapter 2! |
| 2004-11-02 19:40:19 |
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Good story, very well written. It's nice to find a literate author. |