sexstories.com
Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-09-15 06:26:38 | Surfside (chapter one) | dude you should write some novels or somethin cause this is practically as good detail as someone like stephen king only in a different field of writing lol good job dude |
| 2005-09-21 21:21:33 | Surfside (chapter one) | hot story. more more more. hot |
| 2004-10-15 11:08:48 | Curious little Christians | Sick, stupid and totally unrealistic. Most people won't even bother to plow through this crap unless you start breaking it down into paragraphs. Don't use CAPITAL LETTERS for shouting and yelling; you should be able to describe it in such a way that the reader knows exactly what's going on. "Shoot your load in my little bottom..."?? Ever heard an eight-year old say that? |
| 2004-10-16 03:14:04 | Curious little Christians | he may have just done that for the reader..is a little unrealistic though. and 8 and 12 is alittle young, if you're going to do underage stuff, try atleast 15. |
| 2004-10-16 03:51:21 | Curious little Christians | this is one sick story |