| 2004-10-29 07:36:31 |
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Whaoh!Best I've read si far.Its was sexy with a touch of romance.I like how the gilr was older but yet in experinced.10/10 |
| 2004-10-29 08:45:27 |
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another impeccable pecker - this guy is good! |
| 2004-10-29 09:43:19 |
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Encour Encour,
Outstanding 11/10 |
| 2004-10-29 11:02:54 |
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From one writer to another; a fantastic piece!
I have but one minisule criticism pertaining to word usage alone: enormity refers to a deed of monstrous wickedness, and not the same thing as enormousness or greatness. |
| 2004-10-29 11:49:18 |
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It is as much about romance as lust and seduction.
7.5/10 is tops. |