| 2004-10-30 04:18:48 |
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Deffinatly a keeper, and one hell of a story. A little love, some damn good sex, I gave it a 10 |
| 2004-10-30 05:51:44 |
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Awesome story with great description. 10/10 |
| 2004-10-30 06:30:34 |
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Great story; please keep writing! One of the best written stories I have read on here! |
| 2004-10-30 09:04:13 |
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hey great story cant wait for the next 1 im going to keep reading this one brilaint |
| 2004-10-30 16:36:36 |
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good storie |