Geat story Peter i wish i had a hot guy to do it with...but i think it would've been hotter if they did it in the pool...still 10/10
2004-10-31 02:17:55
I loved this story.. awesome characters and descriptions! 10/10
2004-10-31 11:06:33
awsome story i really loved it 10/10
2004-10-31 15:13:20
Thats a damn good story, not oo long, discriptive, great immagry, and though it woulda have been cooler to do it in the pool, its a 10/10 and u better keep writing!