| 2004-11-04 01:49:49 |
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Nice, loved it, best story on the site keep writing. |
| 2004-11-04 01:57:24 |
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Excellent story. It is definitely one of the best on the site. Additionally, it is refreshing to see an author that does not butcher the English language. 10/10 |
| 2004-11-05 02:07:35 |
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Hey, Guys,
I'm thrilled by the comments. There's a different audience out there from what I expected. Maybe more romance soon. But I have a few other stories itching to get out. |
| 2004-11-05 12:49:29 |
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Superb story! It was both credible and well written. The scene in the swimming pool took me back to my first time with a minister's daughter when we were both 16. Like Julie, she was a neighbor, only she attended a different school and curious to explore sex with a boy she secretly had a crush on. I had the same unexpressed feelings until she made her advances. What a summer it was - it was the best two months of my life! |
| 2004-11-06 09:10:40 |
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Great story Peter, I gave it 10/10. I cant wait for your next story. I hope that it is as good as this one. |