| 2005-11-28 23:24:55 |
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this acctualy has the qualitys of an english essay: 3 or 4 main characters, the character has a problem, the chracter solves problem....... |
| 2006-12-01 07:57:03 |
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a noble attempt.9/10 |
| 2007-01-08 18:37:54 |
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Good story has the english feel about it |
| 2007-11-07 13:05:18 |
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true story for sure, I know a girl who had the same affair, but she was with two friends, and the cops were four - they Dped her in the cunt |
| 2004-11-07 15:06:40 |
Virgin Boyfriend
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this is an excellent story from the girls point of view the boy was wussey and had no clue why he was there and what he was doing. I would have loved to trade places wtih him. this was well written and I hope you keep it up |