| 2005-02-17 16:45:21 |
Surfside chapter ten
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sweet ushould make another one yeah |
| 2004-12-01 20:30:52 |
Hot Basket Player
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Where to start... hmm. Spelling sucks for one. Hard to follow , pretty damn bad. Could have given this a zero. WTF ! |
| 2004-12-01 21:53:10 |
Hot Basket Player
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YOU CAN NOT SPELL . |
| 2004-12-04 09:09:25 |
Hot Basket Player
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story at best marginal.a second grader could have done better spelling.gave you a 1 and thats mighty generous.more like a -5.go back to author by mail school. |
| 2004-12-04 10:22:56 |
Hot Basket Player
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Very poorly written. Please learn the English language more before you submit another story. |