| 2004-11-07 11:39:06 |
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i love ur work Keith, i dont think ne1 loves it as much as me! keep writing an il keep readin, love it....asolutely love it!!! |
| 2004-11-07 17:03:16 |
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more voyuerism but despite yuor short-comings excellent story |
| 2004-11-08 15:51:15 |
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please more cheryl and kevin interaction' and voyuerism 'the best parts of your story to me is when kevin and his aunt interact and you should make other people join them not them joining others 'because thet are the root of your story your foundation or base |
| 2004-11-09 14:35:02 |
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Kevin. Another great chapter. I'm not sure why "Titman AL" always wants to tell authors how to write their stories. But I see a lot of comments like that. They can always write their own stuff. I like reading what the author wants to write. A lot of the time I can't even control what I'm writing and certainly am not about to change it because someone writes in a comment that they want a different story. And I love following you story. |
| 2004-11-11 06:27:57 |
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I cant wait for more from yor fantasies... |