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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2004-03-08 06:27:22 | i never thought of that motto that way.........cool | |
| 2004-04-08 19:05:41 | that was hot it made me horny | |
| 2004-06-11 11:08:05 | Hot story!!! More............. | |
| 2007-06-07 17:27:47 | I know I came to this story more than three years after it appeared, but I have to say something about the style, hoping this author and others will pick it up. I really don't understand why practically every sentence in some stories has to end in three exclamation points. It's totally wrong, whatever variety of English is being used - British, Australian, Canadian, New Zealand, South African, Hong Kong, and yes - even American, a variety of English wich has abandoned many of the aspects of linguistic logic, and if it goes much further will no longer deserve to be called 'English'. If you were a student of mine, your report would contain remarks like 'Pull up your socks', 'Pull your finger out', and 'Must do better,' or, if I was American, 'Get with it, for Chrissakes' Freddy |
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| 2004-03-08 06:27:22 | LESBIAN NEEDS | i never thought of that motto that way.........cool |