| 2004-09-01 00:42:49 |
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Holy Fuck, this is the first time i've sworn in a comment, but that shit needs to be blown away. I hate reading stories with punctuation like that. It's like it was written by some foreign, 1300's eleven year-old peasant. Learn to type, or spell, or whatever. Just make it better. |
| 2005-03-04 09:30:54 |
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Blind girl? Young admirer? Not bad! |
| 2004-09-01 00:42:49 |
Awakenings_(3)
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Holy Fuck, this is the first time i've sworn in a comment, but that shit needs to be blown away. I hate reading stories with punctuation like that. It's like it was written by some foreign, 1300's eleven year-old peasant. Learn to type, or spell, or whatever. Just make it better. |
| 2005-03-04 09:30:54 |
Awakenings_(3)
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Blind girl? Young admirer? Not bad! |
| 2004-02-23 03:52:29 |
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wow..this is a really hot one.. |