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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
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| 2004-04-08 19:05:41 | LESBIAN NEEDS | that was hot it made me horny |
| 2004-06-11 11:08:05 | LESBIAN NEEDS | Hot story!!! More............. |
| 2007-06-07 17:27:47 | LESBIAN NEEDS | I know I came to this story more than three years after it appeared, but I have to say something about the style, hoping this author and others will pick it up. I really don't understand why practically every sentence in some stories has to end in three exclamation points. It's totally wrong, whatever variety of English is being used - British, Australian, Canadian, New Zealand, South African, Hong Kong, and yes - even American, a variety of English wich has abandoned many of the aspects of linguistic logic, and if it goes much further will no longer deserve to be called 'English'. If you were a student of mine, your report would contain remarks like 'Pull up your socks', 'Pull your finger out', and 'Must do better,' or, if I was American, 'Get with it, for Chrissakes' Freddy |
| 2004-05-04 22:06:11 | nice but a little ??ing i will give it a o out of ten no just kinding 10/10 ok ;) |
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| 2004-05-04 22:06:11 | MOVIE STARS | nice but a little ??ing i will give it a o out of ten no just kinding 10/10 ok ;) |