| 2006-12-25 20:41:33 |
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Hey dick head loved the story. But fucking hell dude learn someing fucking grammer and spell check, or have they not taught that in preschool yet. Damn fucking 5 yr old wrote this! |
| 2007-01-12 06:52:42 |
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you fucking dickhead can t even speel your name |
| 2007-01-13 18:43:50 |
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Two words : PERIODS & PARAGRAPHS!!!
Get back in there and edit the damn thing so it's readable! |
| 2007-01-19 05:29:54 |
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i would have read on but bad grammar |
| 2007-02-04 07:11:21 |
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Lmao! Omg! Over half of you leaving a comment need to learn how to use spellcheck!!! Talking shit about this story when you, yourselfs can't freaking spell. I agree it needs periods and paragraphs, but until you can learn hot to spell don't go telling other people how to spell. Gheesh! |