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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-09 04:20:23 | Puberty | they willl be cum swallowing fuck toys for everyone and preegnant by the time they are 16. Maybe if their bro doesn't knock them up first. |
| 2007-09-01 10:32:34 | Puberty | ka-poosh-ska!!! me thinks |
| 2007-09-23 15:05:52 | Puberty | (More to follow....) You have got to be joking... For fucks sake don't bother. I know a three year old that can tag words together better than you. 0/10 just wish there was some way of giving a MINUS rating to twats like you. |
| 2007-11-25 22:16:44 | Puberty | your story actually gave me a bit of a boner, which was good. the part about a dick getting stuck in a girl's pussy showed inexperience. Even a young girl's twat isn't tight enough to hold a cock in it, especially after the man has shot a load in it. The cock will shrink and fall out on its own. But you are writing and trying to pull together a good story so good for you. Practice with a spell checker program until you improve in your spelling and grammar, and use more paragraphs. Solid blocks of text are not fun to read. And most people don't pee in each other's mouths on a bed because it stinks, and leaves a stain and makes the bed impossible to sleep in for days afterwards and would definitely attract the attention of the parents of young children like you describe in the story. Realism is part of the charm of a good story. This one doesn't feel real. |
| 2004-12-08 00:07:21 | Time of Passion | lucky you, all i could do was pull my wang and soot off |