| 2007-10-01 23:07:53 |
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good story would be great if u could spell better |
| 2007-10-24 06:11:08 |
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wtf r u stoned crazy freak mate u have some seriours issuies |
| 2008-01-05 18:32:21 |
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gave up after the first 8 lines go to school learn to spell or use spell check and try again |
| 2008-04-09 14:28:04 |
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you have got to be kidding me. stoping, thoght, tougne, etc. etc. etc. Very difficult to read Sorry try again |
| 2004-12-28 01:35:01 |
ON THE ROAD continued
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melissa,melissa,melissa,you have a very erotic mind,your story reads very well,I wish it was much longer,with jamie going out and picking up a guy,or going to a xxxmovie alone,you get my drift.please continue to write,if you need any sexy erotic idea,please e-mail me .....XXX |