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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-13 19:50:28 | Sweetest Surrender | Wonderfully written story, as are your other stories... I would advise using paragrphs, but other than that it was great |
| 2005-01-20 09:14:51 | Sweetest Surrender | One of the best written stories on the site . I congratulate you! I enjoyed thecontent too!! |
| 2005-02-01 07:12:57 | Sweetest Surrender | one of the best stories i have ever read on this site, i wish i was that girl... |
| 2005-02-22 04:37:06 | Sweetest Surrender | Alright everyone I love this stuff and so do you so...uh...?anyway, remember reading is fun but you should never rape somone.( outside the confines of your mind ofcourse ) |
| 2005-02-26 16:35:04 | Sweetest Surrender | You got yourself some loooooooooooong paragraphs there, don't you think? The stroy is well-written but could benefit from some judicioud pruning of paragraph length. Additionally, though well-written, this kinda soft-focus, lovey-dovey rape stroy isn't to my taste. This is kinda like what some D/s couple that's been together for a long time would do--not some rapist who kidnapped a stanrger to use her for sex. It's all way too gentle and sweet for that harsh scenario. However, as i confessed, such is simply *my* prejudice. Lots of people like their nasty sex all sweetened up, as can be plainly seen from other comments. |