| 2006-08-15 00:54:04 |
Fishing Buddies
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How do you have a low score? That was well writen! I loved the vintage aspect of it. |
| 2006-08-29 00:58:46 |
Fishing Buddies
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f |
| 2007-10-12 09:46:07 |
Fishing Buddies
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think you need to describe things more: the feeling of having your dick in that boy's mouth and stuff... everything just passes by. the story's great but, I think you need to work some more... |
| 2005-01-19 12:46:16 |
mums friend jan
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I love sotry that...i, more want....you cool for sure...kiss mum for me u....that's how you write u fucking idiot. don't ever talk, speak or write again...i wouldn't mind ur fantasies if u wrote half as good ad a 6th grader |
| 2005-01-20 10:58:30 |
mums friend jan
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That was one of the dirtiest wanking stories I've read for a long time. Improve the grammar and write another. |