| 2006-08-24 11:45:44 |
mums friend jan
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it's not so much the content, it's the author's complete lack of knowledge of the English language and his utter lack of grammar. the intro "painting mums horny friend" should have given away the author's grasp of English! And what was with the line "I sit down a jerk off smelling her panites"? quotation marks. paragraphs. spell checks. commas. Do yourself and everyone here a favour if you're going to write more stories...read a few published novels, if you know how to read, and find out how not to butcher English! Trying to read this story of grammatical errors was more painful than watching Jaws 3! |