| 2005-12-11 00:05:51 |
Another Day For Melvin
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where does lisa die? im so confused last i read she left after the show. did i miss a story? |
| 2005-01-22 00:23:45 |
ForceXMass=Domination Chapter 2 The Test
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A little long but other then that it was good. I loved her getting control over him. I don't think I would have included the girl at the end. Just a bit too much. It was an awesome story up to that point. 8/10 |
| 2005-02-12 03:03:48 |
ForceXMass=Domination Chapter 2 The Test
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NICE.... Much better written than the first chapter. Who gives the way this is going a 5.46? Moon just doesn't understand a nice story. We all love the sex, but a plot is great!!! It is so hard to find here..I can't wait for the rest of the story!! I GIVE IT A 9!!!!! |
| 2005-05-07 07:54:41 |
ForceXMass=Domination Chapter 2 The Test
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He should have held her down and shot his load up her asshole |
| 2005-01-18 14:06:19 |
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OH FUCK OFF! YOU CANT END THE STORY LIKE THAT! SOMEBODY NEEDS TO GET FUCKED! U ONLY GET A 6 NOW OTHERWISE YOU MIGHTVE GOT A 10! |