| 2005-01-18 21:59:46 |
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obviously u never fucked a girl befor |
| 2005-01-19 02:27:45 |
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good, Im waiting for the rest of it. |
| 2005-01-19 03:51:17 |
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dat needed more sex in it...da build up was amazin...da bro shud have fuked her in da end..ive given it an 8 rite now...it wud have been 10 if der was more of sex in dat..u have da talent..plz write more stories wid much more sex in it. |
| 2005-01-19 06:29:52 |
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part 2 needs sex |
| 2005-01-19 12:39:42 |
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Sorry readers but, if you'll check you'll find that I've not listed this story under incest. Fictional Incest may be a thrill to read but I have my standards even for stories like this.
Thanks Rud Hrnyone for nice compliment.
To other readers - sometimes more sex isn't all that exciting. I try to be original. |