| 2005-01-25 04:08:04 |
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not too shabby, well done on the not including the incest, I'm glad to see that some people actualy know how to write anymore. Keep up the good work. only complaint, if he was named after "Friends" Chandler, he would be 5. other than that and the normal grammar and spellings from countless other stories pretty good. |
| 2005-01-25 21:19:42 |
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wut the fuck wuz dat ? i mean common man ... that story was shit ... first i would have beaten the living shit outta my friends for even thinking that type of shit up about my sister... and second ... i would of had the brother and sister done it in the woods ... don't ever write again |
| 2005-01-26 16:39:23 |
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you douche, the show only came out in '94 how can he be named after chandler if he's 18 |
| 2005-01-28 22:07:12 |
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Damn, I was gonna mention the Friends thing, but Ross beat me to it... |
| 2005-02-20 05:32:49 |
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Km.Kalashnikov....impresive speech,and your right the arthor is considerate but tell me...why did you read this story...? For incest i presume...? |