| 2005-01-21 16:50:07 |
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hey way to go with the story...i LOVED the jacking off part...but not so much the girl. hey and also how can that boy be named after Chandler when Friends hadn't even started before he was born? dumbass. but...other than that, i give it an 8 nice job |
| 2005-01-22 12:55:03 |
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YOU HAVE THE ABILITY OF DOING FINE WORK AS THIS STORY JUST PROVED. PLEASE, LET HER SPREAD FOR YOU, AT HOME, WHEN THE OTHERS ARE NOT AROUND.
THANK YOU! |
| 2005-01-22 15:11:28 |
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Man wtf that suked |
| 2005-01-22 16:18:21 |
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ur supposed ta have the brother fuck the sister. now that's what makes it a good story.
make a sequal and we'll see what happens next |
| 2005-01-23 00:31:55 |
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Jesus Christ. Now, that story impressed me too fold. Firstly, despite the minor plot-holes and grammatical errors (but let's be rational, it's a jack-off story so no one gives a shit) it was a well thought out and put together story. The second point was that you had the chance to involve an incest level to the story and chose not to. Too many stories on this site involve far too much incest as demonstrated by the classic deliquents in this forum expressing their distaste that the brother missed a chance to fornacate with his sister. Their should be more thoughtful authors like you on this site instead of those incensed by good old american sister-fucking patriotism. |