| 2005-01-25 19:21:41 |
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nice work... a lil long on the intro, but it makes the story more intreesting *thumbs up* |
| 2005-01-25 22:54:52 |
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Great story, certainly an 11. Keep up the great work. |
| 2005-01-25 23:39:47 |
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story is not as good as some of you people are saying, I rated it a 5/10. I believe that writer must be rating some of this on their own, noone gets all good reviews from all different readers. I have read over 200 stories on this site and havent seen that happen yet so this has to be bogus hogwash |
| 2005-01-26 01:26:45 |
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ok i just want to start off by saying.... hot chick. this is a really damn good story.. i have read plenty on this site too and not all of them have shitty comments on them. so stop fingering yourself for one second and think about what your gonna type. but i do have to say to peter. this story is awesome. the romance adds and extra sensitivity yet a more sexual premise to the story. i say keep writing this style. but you do what you want bro. peace. |
| 2005-01-26 02:55:20 |
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hey dat story was awesome man...build up was gr8..description was amazin..i wanted it 2 b a lil more longer..but yet..10/10 BRAVO |