| 2005-01-26 18:49:20 |
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spyke, get a fucking life, hot chick has a right to her opinion, who made you god. I also dont particularly like this story, it is average, maybe a 6/1- but no more |
| 2005-01-26 21:07:31 |
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This is solid fiction all the way around. Not perfect. I think some of the dialogue is way too corny, but otherwise it is pretty good. |
| 2005-01-26 23:23:33 |
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its gay |
| 2005-01-27 16:52:12 |
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this story was so passionette,but erotic I love it I hope you make more!!!!! |
| 2005-01-28 00:49:58 |
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Hey Peter, this was indeed one of the best short stories I have ever read. I am happy that there is still some writers who can use simple realistic views, now the ridiculous made up crap that is so common on this site. Keep it comin' ....You rock! And also, Hot Chick, if you don't like it, don't try to throw accusations, just read something else. |