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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-01-27 00:52:01 | One Night Stand_(0) | not a bad story, but the writing in the wrap up is laughable. The author was very descriptive and detailed up until the narator wakes up the next morning, and thne it's in and out of the first person and third person... is it too much to ask for some proof reading? |
| 2005-01-27 06:49:20 | One Night Stand_(0) | I agree with Daniel Schreber 100% but you deserve 10/10 well done very descriptive, readers and writers take this stories lead of story writing. |
| 2005-01-27 21:49:56 | One Night Stand_(0) | "Introduction : This is some scarry shit." Just what is "scarry shit?" Is it anything like scary shit, only with permanent marks? |
| 2005-01-31 05:58:32 | One Night Stand_(0) | I think it's a typo Scarlet, but good interpretation, it fits. I have to say the story was good but the ending was bizarre. I know you're trying to bring the reality of sex into this story but to accomplish that more effectively, try using a spelling and grammar check on a 'word' program and don't weave in and out of past and present tense, or first and third person. Other than that, pretty good! |
| 2005-05-25 17:53:12 | One Night Stand_(0) | Wonderful, lovely, classy. Then you totally screwed it up! aids isn't something that turns people on. At least not me. |