| 2005-01-30 17:01:51 |
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it was good, but confusing!! |
| 2005-02-06 16:36:25 |
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U fucking idiots...that was a great story...the switching of the point of view was like the best element of that story...anybody who got confused on that....should be working at mcdonalds serving french fries...fantastic story sean...i'd say at least an 8.5 outta 10 |
| 2005-02-09 18:20:25 |
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the switch of point of view was confusing so i didnt bother to read the whole thing |
| 2005-03-14 12:07:09 |
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LOVED IT!!! |
| 2005-04-03 09:20:32 |
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I loved this story a lot. You got to see what both of the two characters were thinking. It also made me think that these two were destined to be with each other romatically. I especially loved it when they went and pounded ont he dor when Jenny and John were having sex. I would rate this story a 9 out of 10 |