| 2013-06-29 22:55:24 | The Breaking of Tracy part 1 | absolutely sickening,, and I do not mean that in a nice way | 
			
			| 2013-08-02 09:07:13 | Weird Tales, Succubus. Part 1. | good story so far,, BUT ,, some of your spelling is atrocious,, please,, use a spell checker,, makes the story MUCH better if wording is correct,,, regs from djb8247 | 
			
			| 2014-08-03 23:50:06 | Buying the Family Next Door | story went from good,  to worse,  to bad,  to absolute crap, bringing the dog into it absolutely finished it for me, | 
			
			| 2014-08-03 23:50:17 | Buying the Family Next Door | story went from good,  to worse,  to bad,  to absolute crap, bringing the dog into it absolutely finished it for me, | 
			
			| 2014-12-12 03:07:20 | Sex With My Sister (Book 1 Chapter 1) Rewrite | Rushed,,  but an interesting start to the story. |