| 2014-07-09 02:33:59 |
THIRTY-ONE DAYS...PART 1 [chapters 1-6]
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personally I cant understand why it got even a one star review, does not make any sense at all to me |
| 2014-07-09 02:13:01 |
Stepmom Goddess
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the story is all over the place, tried to read it unobjectively, but after a few minutes trying to make sense of it gave up in frustration |
| 2014-12-14 04:52:21 |
The Battered Lamp Chapter Three: The Witch of Amber
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seems to me to be no plot and just STUPID SEX FOR THE SAKE OF SEX, giving up on it, a stupid story to say the VERY least. |
| 2014-12-08 03:24:51 |
My Sister, My Mom and Me – Part 2, My Mother
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bit hard to read p1 when it is not even listed |
| 2014-12-08 03:18:46 |
hot riya
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you wrote a lot of stories but they are definitely NOT up to scratch, I tried to read 4 of them and gave up in disgust |