| 2012-11-24 17:30:18 |
Cat girl Charity - the beginning.
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i only read 6 paragraphs and switched off,, does not make any senser what ever |
| 2012-11-30 15:06:16 |
My Beautiful Dark Twisted Fantasy - Chapter 1 (Fixed!)
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has to be the most piss weak attempt at bdsm i have read so far |
| 2012-12-02 21:58:52 |
A Taste Chapter 3
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too much build up no action |
| 2012-12-03 15:10:29 |
My Pretty Little Slaves_(1)
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way too much exageration ,completely unbelievable load of crap/// |
| 2014-12-19 21:05:22 |
Magical Hearts
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this is a very good story, but, a very badly written story, |