| 2013-05-28 19:39:51 |
The Adventures of Samantha Part 1-A Movie with Mark
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ref,,,, i know that smell,,,would have been better if u used the word scent instead of smell,,,,,,,smell is pretty derogatory to use about pussy essence |
| 2013-05-30 21:06:58 |
Touch - Chapter 1
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donnybunny,,,very good story,excellently written,looking forward to more from you,regs from djb8247 |
| 2013-06-02 03:16:57 |
Revenge pt 1 - The seeds are planted
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well superkev i for one really think that this story definately needs more chapters to it,you have done a very good job and you will probably be a very formidable auther if you continue,,well thought out and very good reading,,,regs from djb8247 |
| 2014-07-24 22:30:02 |
I Had Always Wanted ..... Part 1
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well told story, really looking forward to more of these two lovers... |
| 2013-06-05 17:54:50 |
Bena Adventures 1 - The Slut in the mall
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your grammer and spelling are atrocious,the story itself is ridiculous and revolting, even a true sub like myself would put you in the grave very quickly. |