| 2005-03-12 13:32:49 |
Timewalker pt 1b
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great dank can't wait to read the next part! Some realy cool story lines going on know! |
| 2005-03-12 14:40:13 |
Timewalker pt 1b
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this needs to be shortened, dont have all night to read what I thought was supposed to be short stories, 1/10 |
| 2005-03-13 03:31:43 |
Timewalker pt 1b
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I say Leave them long. To many storys on this site are to short. This lrenght is good. Can't wait to read the next one |
| 2005-03-14 11:40:35 |
Timewalker pt 1b
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this is way to long 3/10 |
| 2005-03-14 21:03:53 |
Timewalker pt 1b
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here is a good suggestion, shorten your stories so more readers will take the time to read them, 2/10 because of the length |