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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-16 07:21:18 | Trade Show Part 1: Pressing The Flesh | Man, you write a great story! Love the build up and like the others, I need to read parts 2,3,4 soon! I am a bit submissive myself and love being directed, even into a bi situation, if she "tells" me to. |
| 2005-03-11 16:59:10 | Timewalker pt 1a | Anyway, to continue (verbose, ain’t I?), I write for fun, not for profit, and don’t personally care if I ever have a hardback “Béla” with my name on it. Your complaint about your own low scores (two stories back) isn’t any indication of how much better or worse we are, compared to each other – it’s an indication of how much fun you have writing. And you don’t seem to have much fun writing, and it shows in your stories. Start writing for yourself – by that I mean, write what you would like to read, and stop trying to impress people with so much subjectivity. Have fun! And others will start enjoying what you write, too! |
| 2005-03-12 14:42:00 | Timewalker pt 1a | this is way to long, shorten it to about hald or less, 3/10 |
| 2005-05-27 00:21:32 | Timewalker pt 1a | Personally i think the writer of this story does well. Why ? Well the writer is looking through the eyes of each of the characters not just one like many other snuff/death/torture writers does for their main character. This writer has several main characters, and each with their own goal and emotions. The things i lack in this story is a little more depth and more detail (that might be me, but hey we all have different preferences). All in all an good story with the exception of what i mentioned above. Good luck onwards |
| 2006-02-12 07:56:50 | Timewalker pt 1a | I have read from the beginning of your series so far and I can't stop reading it. This has been very addictive and i wanted to thank you for taking the time to share it with all of us! |