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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-03-14 23:00:02 | Timewalker pt 1b | this story takes overtime to read, damn dude, make your stories shorter so readers will have time to read them , only a 4/10 on this one |
| 2005-03-15 15:36:14 | Timewalker pt 1b | People keep complaining about the lenght I think they don't realize these stories are realy novels in which case they are a little short! please keep them up waiting for pt2.of this novel your 4th !in the series of Bela. |
| 2005-03-22 20:08:57 | Timewalker pt 1b | see the user name becky on your stories, kind of strange to see comments all from one user isnt it. not everyone sees things as you or becky, (whichever) name you use does. maybe a 4/10 at best, not type thst really wanted for this site, should be on the readers fiction site. also a little long to be on this one. 4/10 here |
| 2005-07-08 18:35:42 | Timewalker pt 1b | OK, i'v read all the storys up till this one, all good, also noteist that there are normaly very few posts. Is, it because this one whent on the the main story section of the site that it has so many? and there all bad/ not good with one noteable exseption? people, read the hole story not just one part. or get lost, simple as. |
| 2006-01-05 04:28:01 | Timewalker pt 1b | This is again really good. When you posted it, had you written it all? I ask this because some chaptering would have helped (as mentioned by others). For people to downmark this contribution for this reason is interesting. They seem to have a dozen criteria for a marking system, instead of concentrating on the story and whether it entertains them. For the benefit of those who do not know: If you look at the navigation bar on the right-hand side of your screen, the smaller the bar that you click on, the longer the story. Also, if you take it into "Word" you can check the word count. |