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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2005-04-17 20:09:58 | High School Fantasies: Sam | Agreed. Mate 5 inches is small. |
| 2005-04-24 11:33:19 | High School Fantasies: Sam | that last bit made me want to vomit u gross piece of shit pin dick |
| 2005-07-14 07:45:45 | High School Fantasies: Sam | once i was it wasn't in paragraphs, i gave up. please separate complete thoughts..... |
| 2005-09-10 02:02:14 | High School Fantasies: Sam | You've got the basic idea, now you just need to go with it. parapgraphs, realism, and description Nothing you haven't heard before. 6/10, but good luck |
| 2005-09-10 12:02:25 | High School Fantasies: Sam | First off, it starts out like a bad bar joke, you know, the "So a guy walks into a bar carrying a poodle under one arm and a duck under the other..." kind of joke. After that, there is no composition anywhere in this story, Quite frankly I was bored after the first couple lines. |